love how you implemented the rulers and the lines in the bg! super cool. i had a similar idea but couldn't execute it as well. so really cool to see yours. I saw something similar on the AlignUI website too, which I love.
#Feedback request on readability/scanability of case study
onyx umbra
i think in the case study pages though, the rulers and lines are kinda distracting.
kinda clash with the text.
one feedback i got with my case studies was that i had too much text. I can see you do as well LOL
understandable tho. I was told to distill the premise of the text into the heading, and make it super engaging. cuz recruiteers barely read any text. they just scan, look at cool visuals, maybe some headings and make their decision.
im probably not the best judge of the content so ill leave that to someone else. it does feel kinda tight to me though. id probably increase spacings between the sections, to allow em to breathe a bit
idk if youre looking for feedback on the rest of your folio, but love it aesthetically. very tech-y and modern. laid out well. the nav bar resembles mine kinda which is cool. the type pairing is really novel too.
wish this animated when switching modes. totally unnecessary tho lol. I am sure you have thought of doing it, but probably not a priority
waxen bison
@onyx umbra Hey! Thank you so much for all your feedback. I truly appreciate all the details 💖
- I actually used a template I found on Framer! Here is the link to the template if you're interested 🙂 https://www.framer.com/marketplace/template/benton-personal-portfolio-template/
- If it looks a bit cramped to you, then many will feel the same as well. I will look into adding more spacing and remove more text just like you recommended.
- As for the switching light/dark mode, that would be just a cool micro interaction to have!!! Maybe I'll look into some tutorials hahaha Thanks for the suggestion!