mental breach
Hi Shuvam, below is my feedback – great work! Please also review my portfolio if you are able, I haven't gotten any responses yet.
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Instead of "About Project", I would write "Elevate" – better to highlight the name of the project as this is the first thing we see when we open the case study. I would also use a more compelling mockup than the splash screen as your main image.
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Problem statement has some grammatical errors: "Many individuals face challenges in managing their finances effectively." – would also add a period at the end of the paragraph as there are periods at the end of all other sentences.
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A design manager looking at this case study will already be familiar with Design Thinking – I would remove the "Empathize - Define - Idea" image and get straight into the case study
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Your Persona has a missing Location and Age.
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The User Flow is very small even on my large desktop – consider a layout that is more readable
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The low fidelity wireframes are great, great idea to show the process of your work.
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I would remove everything after you show the high fidelity wireframes – no need to say "thank you" or ask for likes – let your work speak for itself 🙂