UX Case study feedback

[willow sigil]

Hello everyone! Just finished working on the first draft for my case study. Woud really love to get some feedback on the content before I put the visuals together to publish.

Here's the link to the case study: https://www.figma.com/proto/KE4YtliT3nvLGfpPAqVOyq/Case-Study?node-id=188-5&t=SrhC63z0mDOGo6dE-1&scaling=scale-down-width&content-scaling=fixed&page-id=1%3A3

And a link to the interactive app prototype: https://www.figma.com/proto/n49ga33wT8TdEZ3Lu09PCf/Cinema-App?node-id=549-1685&t=kEOJLpDMrKe4j9cb-1&scaling=scale-down&content-scaling=fixed&page-id=549%3A1684&starting-point-node-id=1382%3A4996

[warm wing]

right off the bat, there is wayyyyyy too much text that no one will ever read.

the spacing and layout of all the text and elements is solid

not sure if figma wont load imgs here or if its just laid out like this

feels like you're using 6-7 diff font sizes. id limit to 3-4

like the weaknesses here are too small for something that's body text

nobody cares about personas. unless they really influenced decisions, id chuck em

i like the flows laid out like this

unnecessary, everyone knows what a prototype is. knowing how to prototype is a given if youre a designer. focus more on the problem you're trying to solve than checking off things you did in a "process". If that makes sense.

way too much text

use informative and engaging headers followed by short paras if you really wanna explain details.

typo

you could probably make this more visual, and focus on 2-3 core weaknesses.

[willow sigil]

Thank you sooo much for the feedback @warm wing I’ll definitely try to cut things down and focus more on the main points. Do you have any feedback on the content itself if you got a chance to read it?

[warm wing]

i ain reading allat lolll sorry