Poster for a friend feedback.

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So, this is only the first version but it doesn’t feel very “Professional”. Doesn’t feel like anything special.

I was cooking with the main “Arabic lessons” at the top

I fell off with the bold futura

The Arabic writing says “Arabic” in Italian

I don’t know if it’s good or not, leaning towards bad

And the phone number is perfect

Overall I don’t like the fat at the top hourglass shape

Where should I go from here?

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Update I sent this to the friend I’m making it for

It does not mean arabjc

Okay so according to her it is

Completely meaningless

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