So I made this logo for just some personal art and animation that I have in mind. I wanted to make the logo kind of like the logos you see on video game titles, such as Mario or Kirby, hence the 3D kind of effect to it.
Now, there are some things I'm a little unsure about, such as the placement of the text. I feel that if I put it too close together, some of the other details may be lost, and it might make the logo look busier than it should be. I also thought about making the text flow sort of like the comet thing, but I'm not sure if that'll make it harder to read. And finally, I'm debating on whether I should make some of the colors solid rather than gradients, like the "the" and "Starsol" texts have a little gradient to them. The yellow star things are also blurry, maybe they should be solid?
Let me know what you think can make this even better. Maybe I could make this a portfolio piece eventually?