Any and all feedback is appreciated

[glossy gull]

Hey there. Looking to get some feedback and things I should work on for the next episode in my new series on my channel. I do know that my intro was very lack luster and that needs work but if anyone has any other advice or feedback throughout other parts of the video feel free to put them here. All feedback is appreciated.

https://youtu.be/W3JGdnFHhtE?si=TkpO1UAedPa6cVsM

[near tendon]

alright here goes:

• I won't talk about the intro much this since you already mentioned that but dear god please make sure to put mono audio on mono tracks lol. Your voice was only in the left ear for that portion.
• When doing sections like the intro and outro where you're not actively reacting to the game, don't be afraid to do multiple (sometimes many) takes to minimize or hopefully eliminate stutters and hesitations. Getting rid of as many of these as you can will dramatically increase the perceived quality of the video.
• try to sound more energetic. You don't need to have anywhere near children's entertainer levels of enthusiasm, but currently it doesn't really feel like you're enjoying the game. I'd also recommend talking a bit louder in general since right now you can often hear some croakiness due to the low speaking volume. I think this and the tip above are probably the things that will have the most positive impact on the video.
• having minimal editing is okay, but in this case it feels a bit too minimal. There's a lot of dead air making the video feel like it's dragging on that could be trimmed out.
  Okay that was less than I usually give but it's about as much as I could put into writing.
  As usual, only take feedback that aligns with your channel vision. Obligatory record with multiple tracks if you aren't already.
  Good luck!

[glossy gull]

Thanks man I appreciate the feedback a lot I’ll make sure to work on it. 💪