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quartz jackal Apr 12, 2024, 12:42 PM

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Ok, that isn't as bad as I thought it was, BUT the intro goes too long before any interacting with a audience (Speaking) actually happens, then that is when people scroll. Also, the font you used hurts my soul, is that... arial?

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Don't use default fonts

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They are over used

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Download them and install them, use DaFont to find some good fonts

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Also, that thumbnail COULD be better, the sharpness thing is way to small

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Use Gimp

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A very common font on YouTube is Montserrat, but honestly, stand out and pick your own font

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The very start

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From start to about 15 second should be the intro, anything after is a little long

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That also doesn't mean cut it off at 15 seconds, you can make it flow into something else pretty else, introductions to elements in the video, explaining what you are doing, but you've really gotta do something funny, ask a question, something in the first 15

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You can't lose the audience, school at least is useful for once

weary carbon Apr 12, 2024, 1:02 PM

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the intro is decent the proplem is the thumbnail, which is most of the people does have the same issue

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its just very small to see

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1 tip I can give that can solve this proplem is just to see it small when u done and while u making it

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if u cant just take a look at it from far

quartz jackal Apr 12, 2024, 1:03 PM

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There are websites for that I think, just to see them all at different sizes

weary carbon Apr 12, 2024, 1:03 PM

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yep there is

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in phone u gonna see it more smaller than desktop

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but the ppl who watch yt in phone is alot more than desktop

quartz jackal Apr 12, 2024, 1:05 PM

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Make everything visible and big, I have trouble with that too with the gigantic 32 inch monitior

shell jackal Apr 12, 2024, 1:23 PM

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You did pretty good

quartz jackal Apr 12, 2024, 2:55 PM

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Oh, another thing, might wanna invest in a better mic

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Might drive people away

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Blue Yeti is the goal

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Go with a blackout or a snowball. (Snowball is worse, and I've never tried it. Not very popular)

honest rain Apr 13, 2024, 3:47 AM

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Everyone else has given pretty good criticism on the video already

So I'm just gonna say the thumbnail has a lot going on it looks cool but on a small screen like mobile which is important to be able to see properly this would be too many details on a tiny screen and the colors would probably blend together quite a bit

So maybe cut out gallade and give him a bit of a glow behind him

And yea make the sharpness 5 a lot bigger
I would even say if possible move the whole image over to the right to make room for a bigger sharpness 5 but I think its unlikely you have a version of this image that stretches to the side that far so I would either make it bigger or my go to if text isnt how I want is remove the background and make it glow with low opacity and then place it over something in a good spot so you can see the rest of the image

#feedback plz