Grounded: The Second Chapter

[dense elk]

My professional opinion
I like the look of this, but here are some tips.
1- For the text have timers separate the text, if you already have timers separating the text make them longer like 2-3 seconds.

2- Don’t over dye it, your tree is short and filled with stuff, try to make it taller and spread out the components ( like splinters and mushrooms )

3- A better tip or start, instead of just having the message pop up saying climb the tree, make it wait a bit then have a different sound effect play also you could add a better guide up the tree but a single way point works fine.

4- For the starting text you could lock the player in the spawn until it’s over and they get the tree notification.

Those are all my tips, feel free to ignore or use them 👍

[azure pecan]

looks amazing so far!

but as unjustly said, make the delay between texts longer, and i assume thats a young tree, right?

keep it up! im excited to see more

[dense elk]

If you can’t figure out the delay, just ping me 👍

[north mountain]

Sometimes it can be a little messy but coloring the different links are always helpful. This is just one of the many quests i have planned and it has the timers for the dialogue as well changing the armor stand positioning to give it more "life"

Looking good looking good!