Complete noob, out of the game for awhile due to a theft. Trying to rebuild a stolen deck.

[mossy hearth]

I'm trying to rebuild a Kumena commander deck that was lost awhile ago and unfortunately led to me leaving the game for awhile, I don't really remember the cards because it was my girlfriends deck- I only saved some of the cards I ordered in a txt file. I know I am missing lands but before I start re-ordering cards are there obvious bad picks misteps here in this deck? Want to surprise her with it for her birthday later this month!

https://archidekt.com/decks/16678947/kumena_rebuild_

It's been a long time since I've personally done a build so I have no confidence in myself not missing something.

[fast pollen]

[[Fact or fiction]] is good
[[Offer you can't refuse]] is the defaulto noncreature counter spell

[balmy forum]

https://scryfall.com/card/cmm/91/fact-or-fiction

Fact or Fiction <:mana3:292901508771610624><:manau:292901508754702338>

Instant
Reveal the top five cards of your library. An opponent separates those cards into two piles. Put one pile into your hand and the other into your graveyard.
"Slimefoot, I know I said I wanted to grow our repository of knowledge, but this isn't what I had in mind."

https://scryfall.com/card/fdn/160/an-offer-you-cant-refuse

An Offer You Can't Refuse <:manau:292901508754702338>

Instant
Counter target noncreature spell. Its controller creates two Treasure tokens. (They're artifacts with ", Sacrifice this token: Add one mana of any color.")
"I think you'll find my terms quite agreeable, if you know what's good for you."

[fast pollen]

[[monastery siege]] is good card selection and sets up alandra

[balmy forum]

https://scryfall.com/card/c17/88/monastery-siege

Monastery Siege <:mana2:292901509060886528><:manau:292901508754702338>

Enchantment
As this enchantment enters, choose Khans or Dragons.
• Khans — At the beginning of your draw step, draw an additional card, then discard a card.
• Dragons — Spells your opponents cast that target you or a permanent you control cost more to cast.

[fast pollen]

[[Tishana Tidebinder]] is useful

[balmy forum]

https://scryfall.com/card/lci/81/tishanas-tidebinder

Tishana's Tidebinder <:mana2:292901509060886528><:manau:292901508754702338>

Creature — Merfolk Wizard
Flash
When this creature enters, counter up to one target activated or triggered ability. If an ability of an artifact, creature, or planeswalker is countered this way, that permanent loses all abilities for as long as this creature remains on the battlefield. (Mana abilities can't be targeted.)
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