Building my first Temur Fun Deck. Can this Idea work out?

[pale gazelle]

https://scryfall.com/card/dmc/175/xyris-the-writhing-storm

Xyris, the Writhing Storm <:mana2:292901509060886528><:manag:292901508654301185><:manau:292901508754702338><:manar:292901508796645397>

Legendary Creature — Snake Leviathan
Flying
Whenever an opponent draws a card except the first one they draw in each of their draw steps, create a 1/1 green Snake creature token.
Whenever Xyris, the Writhing Storm deals combat damage to a player, you and that player each draw that many cards.
3/5

https://scryfall.com/card/mkc/213/koma-cosmos-serpent

Koma, Cosmos Serpent <:mana3:292901508771610624><:manag:292901508654301185><:manag:292901508654301185><:manau:292901508754702338><:manau:292901508754702338>

Legendary Creature — Serpent
This spell can't be countered.
At the beginning of each upkeep, create a 3/3 blue Serpent creature token named Koma's Coil.
Sacrifice another Serpent: Choose one —
• Tap target permanent. Its activated abilities can't be activated this turn.
• Koma, Cosmos Serpent gains indestructible until end of turn.
6/6

https://scryfall.com/card/fdn/121/koma-world-eater

Koma, World-Eater <:mana3:292901508771610624><:manag:292901508654301185><:manag:292901508654301185><:manau:292901508754702338><:manau:292901508754702338>

Legendary Creature — Serpent
This spell can't be countered.
Trample, ward
Whenever Koma deals combat damage to a player, create four 3/3 blue Serpent creature tokens named Koma's Coil.
The gods imprisoned Koma, fearing he would eventually devour the Cosmos itself.
8/12

https://scryfall.com/card/blb/49/eluge-the-shoreless-sea

Eluge, the Shoreless Sea <:mana1:292901508373282827><:manau:292901508754702338><:manau:292901508754702338><:manau:292901508754702338>

Legendary Creature — Elemental Fish
Eluge's power and toughness are each equal to the number of Islands you control.
Whenever Eluge enters or attacks, put a flood counter on target land. It's an Island in addition to its other types for as long as it has a flood counter on it.
The first instant or sorcery spell you cast each turn costs (or ) less to cast for each land you control with a flood counter on it.
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