#5 paragraph essay about wanting to end it all

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near escarp
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I’m

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Um

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Your essay

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The rate

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2 out of 5

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You gotta fix it

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You using too many easy word

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This is not professional English

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You are not earning scholarships with this essay

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FIX IT

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And how it end your essay is horrible

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FIX IT

near escarp
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Bro what

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You said 5 paragraph essay

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I thought you want how good at your essay

wet river
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a little bit of respect.. please?

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out of context zendo needs serious help and you're here grading their essay

near escarp
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Yessir

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I’m sorry sir

wet river
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appreciate it, howdy!

near escarp
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I will not do that again

wet river
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that's my man

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taking this very thoroughly out of context, i see you DONT want to do things, why?

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always ask yourself why

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why?

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i'll apologize in advance for being annoying, because you're going to hear 'why?' a lot

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why's that?

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im asking why because there's an origin somewhere

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it started somehow

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there's a reason

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find that reason, and turn it into something else

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how did that happen?

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because you dont just wake up and say that you lost everything, interest, hobbies, etc

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something made that switch, right?

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are you still getting bullied to this day?

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do your parents & school know?

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what do your bullies do?

near escarp
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Look if they push you, you beat them up

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Fight!

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Even you think you gonna lose

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Just be mad

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And you will feel great

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After that you will get respect

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Just man stand up for yourself

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Don’t just accept that

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Now if they throw stuff that’s difference

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If they do that

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You really gotta make them pay for it

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That mean you beat the hell out of this bully

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It’s works man

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Don’t be scare

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People who throw stuff are usually week

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You got this man

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Fight for your self

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That’s how human survive

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If you want the good life

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Fight