finite sorrel
These are so minor but the English in them felt really clunky. I’ve attached screenshots (playing on Xbox1)
They should be;
“She was one of my closest cousins” (plural) Or “She was my closest cousin” (singular)
“My heart BREAKS a little every time I remember her, and not a day passes etc” - broke and remember are mixing tenses and reads weird.
“I neended someone like me to fight hard for her” - I know what the implication is, like Yuri needed someone like herself to fight for her cousin but again, it reads off.
Should be “I needed someone to fight as hard for her as I would” or “I needed someone to fight harder for her.”
Anyway just my opinion, again very minor! Thanks for a great game 🙂
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