Anything look off or any tips? 
Also the pose is suppose to the character falling and trying to reach for soemthing ( first photo is the actual pose the second on is so ye can see it un upside down 🤾 )
#Help with pose
slate mica
agile island
Wait so it’s falling down, which hand is reaching out? I suppose it’s our right one on the first image. If so then the reference you have isn’t really good because it’s facing forward while yours is front view so the arm should be shaded like it’s in front of the body I think. Curve the right arm outward more and make the waist shorter so that it looks more curved