critique needed

[olive oasis]

kinda feel like something is off, specially with shading but i dont know if its correct/needs changing. i was kinda surprised how "well" it went but as mentioned something feels off. (unfinished)

[undone kettle]

The anatomy of the left arm is wonky

[olive oasis]

i traced this

feel free to overlay it on my drawing

[undone kettle]

The shoulders are non existent in your drawing

[olive oasis]

any idea how i can fix it?

oh wait i can see it

[undone kettle]

Yeah

Its an idea for how can you fix it

[olive oasis]

@undone kettle

does this look better?

[undone kettle]

Slightly

[olive oasis]

i’ll try to do this when i color, this is very helpful tysm

[olive oasis]

i think i should extend the right shoulder

looks short

[undone kettle]

Try showing some roundness in shoulders they look flat

In the left one

[olive oasis]

alrighty

[olive oasis]

is this better?

[undone kettle]

The other one

[olive oasis]

only changed the shoulder

make it slimmer?

[undone kettle]

Rounder shoulders are not flat

[olive oasis]

this is what i did

[undone kettle]

Yeah better

[olive oasis]

tysmmmm

[formal wigeon]

I also suggest fixing the shirt's ellipses it doesnt fit the arm's perspective and makes it look flat @olive oasis

[olive oasis]

this was the final output

[formal wigeon]

Ohh I was too late oops

it looks very pretty