summer sierra
I painted this a few months ago for an art competition and ended up rushing it to meet the deadline so it’s pretty rough 😓
besides it being scruffy, what can I improve on? please don’t hold back, I know it has many flaws and I can feel it. I just need someone else’s perspective to point them out in specific
btw it got bent in the mail when the competition organisers sent it back don’t mind that LMAO
fervent coral
Is this acrylic?
summer sierra
yup!!
light cloud
It's so evident I've no business commenting on this hahaha- only thing that I notice at first glance (that I feel comfortable saying) is the hairline and eyelashes. Though that might've been part of the aforementioned rushing.
Mascara definitely clumps- I still feel like there'd be a bit more unruly strands here and there.
Hairline is, and I say this with NO intent to offend- looking like a bad wig line.
Again, though, this is a stellar piece. I'm nowhere near this level of experience, especially in painting haha, so- grain of salt.
summer sierra
HELP YOUR NOT WRONG the hairline does look like a shitty wig