How do you clothes. What am I doing wrong

[bitter raft]

There's a massive jump in quality from my clothing and the facial areas and I don't know how to improve it

Visuals, draw overs, anything at this point I just want to know what I can do to fix my issues

[still lynx]

First things first - and I hope this is not to unsugar coated for you - the clothes are simply too flat. A real pair of shorts would simply not stick to you in that way. A jacket would not fall that straight.

But the folds you drew actually look great. I think you have that down pat; it's just making sure the clothes rest naturally on the body.

[bitter raft]

So how should it be like then?

[still lynx]

take a look. See how none of his clothes are stuck to his body?

And if your intention WAS tight shorts or something, you need a way to communicate it's form. In this picture you can see the shadow bending around this lady's leg to show that it isn't one flat piece of cardboard between her leg and the camera.

[bitter raft]

This makes sense

So my shadows (or the lack thereof) aren't giving the illusion of depth