CRITIQUE PLEASE

[rapid verge]

This is fanart for an audio drama (malevolent) (bit worried it’s leaning towards eyestrain)

[marble sierra]

I think the colors are fine, the backdrop could probably be darker though. Also I still see some tangents with the lineart that you can probably fix. Love your style though!

[rapid verge]

Tangents , I can only see the one with the feet and cape, where else are there some?

[marble sierra]

I think there are also some near the hand, lighter(?) and the fold of the cloth

I guess you can probably try changing the color of the lineart to separate the lineart between subjects, I think it could help alot with the visibility

[rapid verge]

Thank you!!

[low ridge]

Mainly the lighting is off. You woudt have shadow were the light from the candle hits

Think about the directon of your light source. Were is it hitting were is it not ? Is the light strong or weak ? Is there anything blocking that light ?

I dident draw this in but the further away u get from the light the darker its gonna get with a dim light like a candle

[rapid verge]

Yeah, when I was rendering I forgot about the lighter until the very end, I will fix it soon!

[low ridge]

Happens to the best of us !! It often helps to plan out the lighting before u start coloring !

[rapid verge]

I fixed the lighting