#Any crit before I start adding color???

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leaden ruin
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What kind of medin are you going for?. for me personally I wanna make sure the liner is absolutely perfect however, if you’re going for something like a painting maybe define some things in the drawing a little more but overall you’ll make up when you’re painting it

leaden ruin
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Ohh nono the line is messy on purpose

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I dont do lineart or perfect rendering

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My style is pretty messy loll

iron loom
# leaden ruin

Hii! I would probably think more of the perspective since right now it is a bit of a mix. If you are going for a bit surreal then I think you can keep it as is. But if you are going for a more right perspective and maybe wanting to give the viewer a more feel to the rooms present then I would go closer to a more correct perspective. Example looking closer to the curve of the pillars.

muted turtle
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I think it looks real cool and a good base for a drawing. "Sketches don't have to be good... They can suck!" That's what I always say. However in your situation you have a GOOD sketch so I wouldn't worry about it.

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Especially since you said you're going to be messy anyway.

leaden ruin
iron loom
# leaden ruin Ohhh tysmm but its supposed to be a normal throne, not a floating chair. Should...

I would do it since I think it gives a bigger impact on the feeling of looking up on something. But I understand that you will lose some cool details that you have to the throne because of the perspective and the foreshortening, and it can be a bit de-motivated since you have all these cool stuff you want to show.
So I would suggest to draw small mockups with super simple shapes so you can find out the perspective that is closer to how you want it. On my current example, it is showing to much of the bottom of the throne, so maybe make that less by showing less of the bottom and showing a bit more of the front side of the throne (like tilting a box), keep in mind that this also means for the person looking up and the sharp tilt of the pillars. Something else you could also try out is the sizes of the throne VS the person. A big throne over a small person can give an effect of feeling small for the viewer, and maybe it can bring the details of the throne more? Im not 100% sure cus the only way is to test it out.
If you then find the mockup you like or seem fit you can then just use it as your guide and adjust your current piece accordingly, since it will minimize of you guessing and adjusting on you current awesome piece blindly. And maybe all you need to do is using a lasso tool and transform certain object of your piece to get closer to the mockup

leaden ruin
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OKKK TYY THAT WAS SO HELPFUL