I don’t like how the lineart turnd out

[still berry]

I’m pretty new to lineart and still trying to figure out how to do it. I finnished this drawing and I’m not happy with it. I wanna know what’s wrong with it so that I can inporve nexst time but I cent seem to figure out what went wrong with the lineart so I’m struggling to self critique. I alredy know the pose is a bit stiff and I need to work on that as well as the face anatomy and so on. But can anyone with a bit of experience with lineart critique it so I know what to studdy ?

[latent tusk]

Honestly it looks pretty finished maybe practice lineart consistency, that’s the only thing I could say. With lineart consistency I mean how thick or thin the lines are, for example the hand in the center has thicker lineart and my eyes focuses on that first

[still berry]

Yeaa. I did that on purpose cus I like wen the hands get some of the fokus but I was confused on how I was gonna do that with the face so I dident as a mutch. Witch then prob drew the wrong attention

[latent tusk]

Yup figured it was something like that, it just feels weird because it’s the only thing with that line size

[still berry]

I’ll keep that in mind !

[frigid vigil]

One thing that you could try is looking for where the light source is coming from, and then making your lines thinner where it meets the light and darker where shadows should be.

Like right now I think the line art is fine, but you'd be surprised how much depth that would add and how much it would improve the lineart.

Also, one of the things I've seen used well by artists much better than me is using outlines, so try playing around with that. Outlines to separate the clothes from the character, outlines to separate the accessories on top the clothes, outlines to separate one character from another character, and then outlines for the overall piece.

Sorry for being roundabout, what I mean is try playing around with outlines.

[still berry]

Oooo this is very cool !,, imma try that thank you !!!