Please point out to me why this looks wrong, something about it has been bugging me but I couldn't figure out what on my own
I don't know why but I just wanted to also show the chibi of what I'm drawing
#If only a cool and totally awesome someone could help me.... Sighing emoji
cloud night
split adder
I also suggest taking a look into line weight
Do a little study on that
split adder
It looks good, just continue drawing
You either force yourself past the phase where you don't like it or start a new one, there's no simple trick lol
There's no fundamental flaws in the one you sent, just continue and it'll look better
astral hearth
You haven't finished yet, there's not much to go off or do than just continue
astral hearth
The left arm was too long, the elbows should generally align
Except if one arm is raised or rotated a lot
Idk or I'm not sure on how to explain the other things I changed
I just eyeballed the proportions
I'm not sure bc there's no construction lines on your drawing so I can't know what you were going for precisely
cloud night
Do a little study on that
A lot of people say I need to add line weight but I really don't understand how but I've been trying
cloud night
There's no fundamental flaws in the one you sent, just continue and it'll look b...
Thank you a lot I'll keep that in mind
astral hearth
A lot of people say I need to add line weight but I really don't understand how ...
Tbh it's up to your preference
If you don't feel like doing lineweight then don't, if you want to try it then sure but if you prefer without line weight keep in mind that you'll have to make the drawing more interesting in other ways, so like a more detailed rendering or lots of colors, etc.
astral hearth
A lot of people say I need to add line weight but I really don't understand how ...
Im not a pro at lineweight but with the knowledge I know, lineweight is used to emphasize a shape, it makes it stand out more from the rest that have a thinner lineweight
There's multiple ways you can use lineweight for different reasons or effect you want to achieve :
- Make the outline of the main subject (eg. A character with thicker outline compared to the background) thicker to make it pop out
- Use lineweight to show the perspective of the drawing, so making the outline of the part(s) that is closer to the camera to show that the part(s) is closer from the rest
- Use it to imply the where lighting source is. For example if you have a character standing and they have a light above their head, their hair will get lightened by the light source so you make the hair thinner to make it appear brighter