#Whats wrong 😭

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warm yew
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I was working on this piece earlier and thought it looked wonky then tried to fix it but it still looked wonky so I thought I had just been drawing for too long so I stopped and took a break thinking maybe if I come back I’ll see it. Now looking back at it, it’s still looks wonky but idk what’s wrong.

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The longer I look at it the more normal it looks but deep down I know something is wrong ☠️

quaint rain
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right eye

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her right eye is so much different than left

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and im not talking about perspective

lyric flame
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In general it look good 🔥 ,but keep in mind under chin cant be the strongest shadow ,u have reflections refractions also general light ambient one etc. and how was mentioned the eye issue the general shape has to be the same just adapted to perspective angle . Good luck 😎 one detail i forgot to mention is the ear its look off if u want i can show u what i mean , bee free to dm .

tribal abyss
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I think it looks good as well. The advice given is spot on. My only critique is this and its going to be picky anatomical clothing item. The front of the outfit is to close/low to the nipple. Asuming im seeing the outfit corectly you have the edge of the colar on a loose outfit sitting right on the nipple based on the shape under the shirt thus part of the areola would be showing at minimum. The curve right under bend towards the body infers thats the underside of the breast thus the nipple would sit at that apex exactly where the edge of your material is.