zealous beacon
I can tell that the anatomy is off, like the head being too big and the torso is kinda wack, I can't for the life of me figure out how to fix the torso, More specifically the angle of the stomach and slightly above. Feel free to edit the piece because I'm more of a visual learner and worded instructions stress me out.
oak tartan
You forgot a whole mussel group under the arms and maybe work how muscles stretch and move when bent, I’d advice you to also remember less is mar and not to „chicken scratch „ drawing like that will seem less confident and mistakes can easily happen an will be harder to fix
I made this since you said your a visual learner, if you have any questions please do ask