What do y'all think of this?

[lilac sand]

its my own fan art of Vandetta from overwatch
(didn't draw all of her thing but close enough)

[sand sky]

Heyo! It looks good so far, too bad it doesn't fit the page 😭 What medium will you be using for this piece? :>

[lilac sand]

@sand sky a hb 0.5 and 0.3 mechanical pencil

[sand sky]

Oh so you won't be coloring ? Only in pencil? Well it looks cool, I do like how the sword is positioned, it goes well with the pose :>

[lilac sand]

yeah no coloring, it takes away from learning what you need to learn. at least that what i think. trying to learn how to draw armor and clothes.

[ivory karma]

Id advise you to clean out the lines or erase a few with an eraser, and also I noticed she’s missing the forearm holding up the sword

I generally for the sword draw the lines straighter it’s hard to distinguish some lines and how they connect in your drawing