This looks so well rendered 
#How to render hair?
misty loom
Make the hair continue here
And then highlight the top of her head with similar line strokes w low opacity
flat salmon
Big shapppe then medium shape then Small shape! Rn its just too many small shapes, so it looks a lil awkward.
Even tho when hair is wet and small shapes prevails, there are still big/medium shapes.
native depot
flat salmon
Definitely better! I would be careful of how sharp the hair is. Maybe soften the edges a lil bit bc its not fitting too well w the very soft face and background