#I would appreciate general critique on this art piece
hasty marsh
gray plover
Allow me to draw over your drawing. Nice art btw
Nvm
The face ! It seems like the forehead is getting squished
hasty marsh
Oh yeah thats true changed a bit here:
hushed crescent
Apologies in advance for this being a bit of a nebulous critique, but the main thing that jumps out at me is a lack of confidence. I can tell you know a decent amount of artistic theory, and that you worked quite hard on this piece; but there is an inescapable amount uneasiness that distracts me.
This, of course, will naturally solve itself over time, but it is something to be aware of going forward. I can most clearly point this out in the shirt wrinkles and hair detailing. The shapes don't feel intentional nor "designed" so to speak.
A more concrete piece of critique is that there are quite a few errors with your lighting. I can't quite piece together where exactly it's coming form. I quickly just painted over to make that more clear and adjusted the values a little bit.
hasty marsh
Thanks I get it! It’s like my shape language needs to be more intentional and I’ll also fix the lightning.
