How do I make my photos better to post?

[pliant pivot]

So this is an example of the editing Ive done for one of my pieces and I’m wondering if theres anything else I can so to make it better before I post

[inner yew]

Imo i think all u need is lower light

The camera always takes photos too bright so lower the brightness before taking photo

Dont eggagerate satuation rather increase the contrast by a bit