#Need help with the hair + critique on anything

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marsh haven
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Im struggling to see how i should draw the hair, especially on the right side. He has dreads, but like, very loose(?) ones. If anyone needs other pics of how his hair looks i can send it, ive drawn him before so. Feel free to give crit on anything else!!

marsh haven
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Bump!! And, for reference, him in other pics/sketches

marsh haven
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Bump

pure basalt
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small critique, it looks like you gave him lipstick because you shaded his lips but not the rest of the face. when it comes to dreads, you can see in the other sketches of him how the thick gray brush is doing most of the work, not the lineart

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lineart isn't used much in realism, but especially not in hair, because hair needs to be impressionistic to feel real

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so the gray mass implies the shape of the hair and the thin, sketchy lines imply the texture

marsh haven
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@pure basalt like this??

marsh haven
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Bump, any crit??

pure basalt
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he still looks a bit womanly

marsh haven
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Hold on ill try checking the proportions

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Im trying to do it without rendering in any way. so the shading is hard lmao

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I dont know what to do without changing it too much 😭

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@pure basalt

pure basalt
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how come you want to avoid rendering the skin?

marsh haven
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Its more of a sketch than a complete work

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After i finish this one ill move on to a piece i will render (cause i still need to learn it)

pure basalt
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so what do you mean by rendering? cause to me, rendering is just shading

marsh haven
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Rendering i see as like fully going over the lines with shading

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This is more minimal, sketchy shading

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Im not good at explaining

pure basalt
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sketchy shading like this?

marsh haven
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Basically. Just unblended yk?? Ive only been doing it with lines

pure basalt
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your method of crosshatching/shading reminds me of those photo-to-drawing filters

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which, if you aren't a robot, is very difficult and takes forever

marsh haven
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True 😭 i dont know why i went for that either

pure basalt
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in sargent's sketch, he didn't really blend but he used a much wider side of charcoal to shade the delicate skin

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all the lines are different sizes

marsh haven
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Ohh

marsh haven
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Is this better?

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Oh damn it u left the server 😭 bump ig then