Help with the anatomy/proportions/colouring? (+any other critique is welcome!) | Art Club | Page 1

proper fable Sep 27, 2025, 8:34 PM

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wrt the eyes, i think making the eyes half-lidded can reduce the intensity of the eyes and make it more casual

proper fable Sep 28, 2025, 2:13 AM

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really awesome! hmm the left eye may be a bit far to the left, and the jaw feels a bit short with the neck placement - i could try to redline it a bit if you don't mind!

limber wagon Sep 28, 2025, 3:51 AM

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Sometimes I use simple forms to confirm that I understand the forms im painting, instead of just copying the reference. It also helps to make sure that pose feels natural and see the flow better. Color-wise, you did an amazing job!

candid bloom Sep 30, 2025, 12:01 AM

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I feel like arm is like little bit larger then her chest proportions. perhaps not sure tho its just my gut feeling that's all

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Beautiful art anyway👍

midnight prawn Sep 30, 2025, 8:43 AM

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Your rendering is beautiful! If youre looking for closer resemblance to the reference, then you need to counterbalance the pose using the hips. On the reference, her hips tilt forwards, but her legs are going directly under (or you can push them back (as i did here oops) ) to exaggerate the pose

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and i guess I titlted the breasts up a little to create a counter balancing of the torso and the hips

candid bloom Sep 30, 2025, 5:57 PM

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Ye only the left arm I was specifically taiking about the tricep area

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It's a little bit wide that's all cuz she is physical look skinny so I thought it better if that arm was Skinner as well

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Over all its good 👍 good job

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#Help with the anatomy/proportions/colouring? (+any other critique is welcome!)