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#foreshortening/perspective off?
alpine sail
rancid hamlet
So I think above the hand u have a bit of shoulder poking thru? I'm not totally sure if that's what that lines meant to be but I'd say cut it since it muddies the view and if the hands reaching out, it would block view of the shoulder anyway
If possible, try and get a reference of someone pointing towards the camera or something - since foreshortening breaks standard proportion having a reference helps massively
Also just to make the lines communicate more clearly, maybe consider heavier line weight on the hand and knife- general rule that the things closest to the camera should have heavier line weighting, it helps create depth and make it easier to tell the knife hand is reaching out
alpine sail
yeah i haven’t done any major line weighting yet but that was my intention
i was looking at multiple references but i just couldn’t find the right one that had exactly what i was looking for so i kinda had to make an amalgamation of all of the stuff i was looking at
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