any tips + advice, trad art

[nocturne sleet]

my art looks off, dont know what to do or why it looks so uncanny 💔💔 but pls point out anything weird 🥹

[fallen blaze]

Hello, the one huge thing that will help you is the proportion of the head. If you draw a circle to start out, it should be cut in half, the half way line marks the brow line. Sorry the photo is shit i just did it quickly but if you need further explanation dont be afraid to ask