Final advice for a piece!

[warped wren]

Give that man some shadow in the eyes

And maybe make the inside of the mouth a purple or red?

All stylistic choices

But it will make him look like he was given as much effort as the beautiful dog (not to be harsh!)

I can’t really help with the anatomy for the little boy

As I’m not that good myself yet to figure out what

But something looks off

And its hard to figure out with the added perspective stretching