I need reviews and what to do better

[restive tendon]

Jojo Diego Brando

I did it below two hours

[thin granite]

What in particular do you want to improve

Anatomy? Line wight? patterns? Expression? Ect..

[restive tendon]

@thin granite Mostly pen shading and give a review and what to improve

[thin granite]

Okay

So from your drawing I can see two types of shading

One is chicken scratch and the other is parallel lines (idk the actual names)

I would suggest taking those two types if shading and instead of using both on the same item

Try to use only one on one type of item

For example use only chicken scratch on the shirt and only parallel lines on the pants

It also looks more in unison for the parallel lines if you make them all go in one direction

I do like what you did with the full black pen shading

Since i don’t know if its supposed to be actually a really dark value pattern for some of the piece I cannot really say if you should add more pure black shading

But it might add more unision

And make some places like at the elbow less out of place

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@thin granite

This was the drawing I draw from and I see the elbow I mess up

[restive tendon]

Also I kinda just posting my art and never knew what any art terms mean