Ignore everything else, I just need help with how the face looks, it seems off and idk why, i flipped canvas and redrew it like million times already 😭
#Please help adjusting the face
sterile yarrow
pulsar idol
Hi! His face is fine, and i realy love your character desighn!)
But you have just two problems here:
- You forgot to draw the base of his fase first and then make "over" adding hair, eyes and else, thats the reason why his forehead looks a bit too huge, and hair line doesnt follow its shape
- If i got it right - you wanted to draw him like he is looking at us from down to up, at this perspective - face`s propotions will be a bit diferent then if he whoud look straight at us.
- You made the distanse between eyes too far, forgetting about perspective in this racurse you chose
But in general i love your artwork, it lookes awsome! I also recomend to practise a bit on drawing heads from diferent perspectives and studying how will propotions change depens on diferent racurses! Keep up, you are doing great!
sterile yarrow
Hii thank you so much for your prespective on this!! I'll try adjusting it further this is really helpfull
I haven't drawn anything seriously in a year so I clearly need to get back some skills i used to have 
chrome viper
just a nit pick but the jaw would look different (cant make an example right now) but if ur gonna use the example above the back of the jaw is too wide, instead it should end just before lower lock of hair that covers the jaw.
sterile yarrow
Mm yeah I kinda get what you mean since our initial poses are very slightly different
I'll keep what you said in mind im adjusting it rn🙏