From proportions, shadows yadadada, any feedback to refine it yet make it sort of messy at the same time??? I’m aiming for this sort of style (last two photos, first ones mine!)
#Feedback of any sort?
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merry umbra
The last two styles are both really cool but you should aim more for the last one because it has good contrast. So there’s a lot of colors and details, but you can still differentiate between the background and the subject. At the moment your piece has really good use of colors but it’s lacking that contrast / range of values