#Any critique? First study in a while without making it a character

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sand siren
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just wondering where i went right/wrong and any ideas on how to improve.

velvet loom
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Hyaawwwt

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I think you didn't make the face look up enough which altered how his left arm got drawn

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It's more relaxed in ur drawing

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In the pic u can really feel that his arm is stretching along with the side of his chest

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But the arm on urs looks like it's faltering a lil

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Das all I got

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Legs good body good, I think only things that can be adjusted is from armpits up