#Composition Critique ples

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wispy kiln
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does the composition seem okay? because the focal point of this scene is the guy in the middle

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does it catch attention?

south bear
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Maybe have a little more contrast where the light meets the bunny guy and the other guy

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Like having more shadow on the non bunny guy

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Towards where his body is cutt off

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Its a bit hard to see them both at first