#Smths off…

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lofty hill
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Idk if I’m js delusional or something is just… wrong.
So, I’m trying to draw a character from a game I play ( cookie run kingdom )
And I’m not quite sure if I should change something like the proportions of the TW: small NFSW || breasts ||
Or like the sizing of the braids etc !

Nyeahh! If you need more refs the name of the character is “ white lily cookie “
Reminder: this is a sketch.

Ask me any other details and furthermore, I’ll ( hopefully !! ) respond.

Thanks for reading :]

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And the crescent shape is the nose ( not a smile :’]] )

fallow oak
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AA i love CRK. I would say the hair has a lot more volume, you've kinda drawn it stuck to the scalp. Remember that it is divided into big simple sections so don't try overcomplicate the ends and make them have 100 smaller sharp edges, just one or two. I also think youve added maybe too many sections in the braid, it kinda looks like a scorpions tail again you want to keep the simple organic shape, with no sharp edges.

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And also bring the lines that divide the hair into the middle of the scalp where the crown is so we see the way the hair flows rather than looking flat

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if you also wanted to keep some of the same proportions as the og, the flower should also be bigger

lofty hill
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TYSMM !! I’ll implant them into it :)

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If I may ask, may you give examples ( maybe show mah :3 )

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Also, should I add the braid to side ?

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Onto the shoulder ?

lofty hill
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Does this look better ?

nimble beacon
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Id say try to male the hair bigger,usually the shape of the hair is much bigger than the skull,also the braid and flower would also be bigger i think.