#Need feedback

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rose tulip
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Longtemps no see
So here is my last color study
CC are very welcome 😊

wise haven
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Wow you really have did that super well, I don’t have anything to help with personally, at this point all you can do is get deeper into detail, i don’t know about the refrence but with the top part of the right one there there’s that one block of color that seems like it would have a bit of britgher lighting like you see in the one in the back but maybe not, I just think that one part feels empty

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It’s great you did crazy good

rain palm
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Beautiful work! For a color study it's perfectly successful. I really feel the glow! Minor nitpick: I'm not sure the lighter value + hue shift in the top left is adding anything, and may be slightly distracting. There's this beautiful story about these brightly lit, glowing oranges, and then there's what seems like a new light source...hitting on a wall maybe?... but not affecting the rest of the piece. It's not part of the story here. It's making me think about it and wonder what it is, rather than just focusing on the wonderful oranges.

surreal saddle
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Wooooow! Really good! But for my taste the wall is a bit too gray, maybe add some more color to it, some more bluish tints to it maybe?