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tired burrow Jan 24, 2025, 5:58 AM

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I like how it turned out, but I'm not sure about the composition. Does anyone have any ideas?

tough widget Jan 24, 2025, 6:22 AM

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Dunno if its too late but the value between the sunglasses and skin look nearly identical. I recommend to darken the sunglasses so that way in black and white you can more easily tell where the edge of the sunglasses are and tell the shapes apart

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I also feel at least some of the hand should resemble the face in value

tired burrow Jan 24, 2025, 5:17 PM

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Thank you! I'll try that

tired burrow Jan 25, 2025, 6:44 PM

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Something like this?

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