#I would be very grateful for any advice regarding my art

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uneven prawn
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I want it to look as good as possible because it's for a friend. I don't like that how this look like now

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somber willow
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i think it looks pretty damn good but if you want me to nit pick i think that it looks a little flat. best wat to fix that is to make your values more harsh. make the shadows darker for example.

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since your background is pure black darker shadows will make it look like it fits in the scene better

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another thing you could do is add some shading to the blue eye ball because the eye lid should cast a shadow. and you can add a highlight to the red eye

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the last thing is the his facial expression is a little stale. you can open his eyes wider and shrink the pupils to give him a crazed look or something interesting like that. but thats really a stylistic point.