The piece is in the sun but there's barely any shadows (I also recommend using darker shadows to make the peice look better)
#How can I make this piece great?
mortal prawn
mortal prawn
Ohh oops my bad
winged musk
calm grove
If you want to improve on composition, try exaggerating the scale of objects! In case you don't know what scale is in an art piece, it is the relative difference in size between one object and another.
For example, the hanging basket of fruits is slightly bigger than her head right now, but not by a lot. I like it a lot because it is being looked down on from above so it shows perspective! What you can try to do is exaggerating just a biiit more so it is even bigger than her head! However, so as not to steal the spotlight from the character, you can blur it a bit when you are done colouring it so it is out of focus. You can do the same with the tree. Even the small objects farther away from her can have their sizes adjusted to create interest. Experiment and see what you like!
Oh uh sorry if that was too much btw 🙊 i kinda yapped there.
calm grove
No problem! I am glad i helped you.
Go! I bet it would look so muck cooler when finished. Very exciting ＼(^^)／
zealous granite
i liked the perspective before, it looked like u were looking at her from above, which was just cooler in my opinion, now it looks 2/3 angle smth
keen shell
SO PRETTY AND SOCMYCH IMPROVEMENT
zealous granite
well you cna change the fruit basket a lil, if you make it more tilted towards the camera then it would give that effect. but yea u r right she there arent much difference lmao i just thought cuz of the roughness of the sketch XD. all in all it looks really good now
love em colors
good
zealous granite
can i be brutally honest?
||the hands look kinda horrible sowwy 🤧 ||
the upper arm looks elongated imo, should it be this long? but idk, it could be lense distortion.
its cool other than that tho, totally vibing with it
zealous granite
the hands just look . . . funny imo XD, i mean the way the fingers are just dont look natural. but if its supposed to be cartoonish then its alright i guess, idk tho i dont draw cartoon styles
if its cartoonish then its alright, i am just used to drawing anime and realism so i really dont understand cartoon anatomy
zealous granite
yea,