#General Critique Update

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lofty gate
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After a bit here's an update on the piece I posted awhile ago. After delineating for a bit I decided to go with this skyscraper construction site background. I'll probably add more. I'll post a before and after so you don't have to look for it.

Any Critique is welcome.

sand geode
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the multicam is immaculate

lofty gate
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@sand geode thanks 🙂 I just overlayed an image for now, but I'll probably add texture later and remove some parts where I don't want it.

sand geode
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wait I didnt even think of that
i’ll use that technique next time i make someehing

lofty gate
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Yessir, It's a little concept art/photo bashing/photo editing technique kinda thing to streamline the workflow. Very useful if you're lazy 🤣

tall stump
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I absolutely love this!
However, the face is a little flat looking due to the eyes.
The eye facing us is too large and looks as though it’s facing the viewer head-on.
Considering where the chin is, the eyes should shift, as well as the nose and mouth, following the face’s center line.

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Sorry for the bad example, but this is what I ended up with after a few minutes