This is one of my favourites ive made. it just looks like it could look a bit better
#Could i have made this better?
dire lance
terse plank
Hi! Your drawing looks amazing! I love the stylization!
There are a few things I noticed, such as:
- The elbow of the hand holding the guitar neck is a bit too high. If you want accurate proportion to your other arm, I'd recommend bringing the elbow out downwards, or to the side.
- The other arm is good! I do recommend shortening the top of the arm, however.
- I love the angle you have it at! However, at the angle you have the leg, the foot can't extend out that much. (the left leg on the person). Either you can make the foot turn down (like in the first picture), or foreshorten the leg to where the bottom of the shoe is showing :)
Your drawing looks great already, but I hope this helps!
dire lance
I see what you mean tsym for the feedback 💙
dire lance
Tried adding your pointers but couldn’t redo the legs unfortunately. And it looks miles better ty
