Heyya so i was wondering if this sketch can become more better? Thanks for the help btw!
#Can you help improve this sketch?
steel pollen
sonic stirrup
Bust is too big in comparison to the hips. I asume this is a woman. For women the hips are about as wide as the shoulders. The shoulders also dont seem to have hardly any muscle definition going on. You definitely need to make the arms more than messy cylinders as well as define exactly what the hands are looking like
digital orbit
i agree with ciborg. additonally the posing is really unnatural. the weight is shifted towards the left and she looks like shes gonna topple over if i pushed her slightly. shes just pigeon toe-ing too much. it also looks like you were drawing at an angle. id suggest you draw facing the tablet/monitor head on and not slouching or sitting at a weird angle. itll squash everything
heres both of them side by side for you to flicker back and forth. much of your anatomy is squashed and off in proportion. id suggest you do studies of anatomy
