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sleek kayak Jul 18, 2024, 6:34 PM

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I critiqued myself

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rustic maple Jul 18, 2024, 6:50 PM

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If these extra eyes follow logic then I would recommend making the eyes in different perspectives as the go more to the right view.

sleek kayak Jul 18, 2024, 7:00 PM

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I CHANGED THE EYES WAIT

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Here's a cleaner sketch I jus did

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But like

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Idk how to do hands

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Also the mouth IS PISSING ME OFF

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Mouf

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Better

sleek kayak Jul 18, 2024, 10:10 PM

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OKAY I CHANGED HER COMPLETELY

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I felt like she was too spiky

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Like

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Too mamy triangle

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So I put some circles

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I don't want her to be too scary

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