#scaramouche sketch help

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tribal sluice
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what should i change/fix? MacchiStars

wintry current
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Hello, I'm not the best at giving critiques so just ignore me if you want haha. There are things you can improve or change.

First thing I noticed are Wanderer's eyes, the eyes should be one eye apart.

Next are the lips. Since you seem to be going for a semi realism style, I suggest that you shade the lips instead of tracing the outline. I can't really explain it but I'll try to provide a reference.

The same goes for the nose.

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These are only my opinions haha. I'm not a professional ( ω-、)

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They're not really good haha