#CRITIQUE PLEASE

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steel bronze Jul 12, 2024, 4:32 PM

I ended up scrapping my previous design and went for something else. Is there anything you think I should fix or add? I’m also open to suggestions. MacchiStars

eager pond Jul 12, 2024, 4:48 PM

Probably fix your foreshortening (hand), if that's what you're going for since the hand looks like it's meant to extend closer to the viewer pov (if that makes any sense) but is actually just kinda dangling off the wrist