#art feedback ;)

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waxen magnet
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Good night!!,
I'm not entirely satisfied with the drawing yet and I'm seeking constructive criticism. I'm not sure exactly what I'm dissatisfied with. Maybe it's the hand, maybe the direction of the eyes, but I've been trying to improve for hours and still haven't achieved a result that I'm happy with.

[tw:: blood and heart]

slate needle
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The bangs look too thick
The shoulder on out left you can cut some of it off or selse her shoulders looks too wide
You can refine some edges seperaring the hair and the body

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I way have taking away too much shoulder but yk what I’m trynna try I hope

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I do really like his piece tho, keep it up

waxen magnet
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tysmmmm