my so far biggest artwork, need critique (still sketch and i feel like the blonde girl's posture is | Art Club | Page 1

maybe put the left hand of the blonde on the shoulder of the blue, i think the head is raised too much, maybe lean the blonde back as a whole, because from I can see right now it seems they are taking selfies and the camera is above according to the perspective of the blonde but the rest of the characters doesnt follow that. The reason why I thought like this is because the blonde is in the middle of a 3x3 template and that catches the most attention so audiences would look at the posture of the blonde and blue first and that can really change how the audience perceive this perspective if that make sense

#my so far biggest artwork, need critique (still sketch and i feel like the blonde girl's posture is