Hi there! The Torso of the character getting carried is a bit unnatural. It’s bent, make it longer
#please I need help!!
gusty basin
fluid tiger
I recommend finding reference photos on pinterest that are anyway close to this pose
ebon knot
things id change to match your style still. i highly suggest you find additional refs to help you and learn anatomy in the future
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both characters are missing the back arms. ik in the og its hard to tell but you would still see bits and pieces of the the arm thats hidden
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the back isnt curving to show 3d-ness. its p flat. the body is round.
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the right persons arm should extend out more. rn its too short. the back leg thats bent isnt the same length as the front leg. its also not connecting the the thigh when you draw in the proper anatomy
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the person on the lefts pelvis is not in the proper place. it should be moved up more to make room from the socket of the femur and the femur (hip dip) area
when drawing anaatomy thats overlapping its better to draw out the entire limb and then erase what you dont need to keep things in check